Liked first for the poem, as well as for the use of reference links without interrupting the flow of the poem itself. I might re-use that idea.
Rosie Le FaiveWhen Fernie was too hot, we took a walk
through old-growth cedar forests trail to a lake
where thousand-year-old canopies could block
the sun, and underfoot a carpet make.
the prettiest tree / that you ever did see…
Thanks! I tried a different approach to capturing the web-of-thoughts… I hope it conveyed some of what I hoped it would!